Comments on: Releasing Scripts to Video Bloggers

By: Thowell3

Thowell3 — Mon, 07 Apr 2008 04:25:13 +0000

I liked the whole thing about the Mario World. And Believe it or not I have actully had conversations like this with my friends about Mario like almost 2 times a week we descuss things like that. I’ll Probly do that skit with my friend after I get the Camera I am looking at but First I need to get a Job.lol. Story of my life really almost always broke.

By: Anna

Anna — Sun, 30 Mar 2008 15:03:26 +0000

I like it. I’ve written that kind of thing before, in those idle moments when your brain should be asleep but isn’t…

On the one-in-a-hundred chance that you’re interested, you can find something I’ve written here:

http://creativesplurges.blogspot.com/2007/07/brother-microstory.html

Ah go on, it’s only 100 words ;)

By: jj

jj — Sun, 30 Mar 2008 02:52:32 +0000

It’s very K. Smith. Was that one of your inspirations for this?

By: Antha

Antha — Sun, 30 Mar 2008 01:31:14 +0000

I’m going to have to join the band wagon here and tell you that it’s Kevin Smith-ish in dialogue, but in my book that makes it awesome. The best part is that i could see it being acted out as i was reading it. The mark of a good writer, in my opinion. Good job. =]

By: blacklance

blacklance — Sat, 29 Mar 2008 22:58:04 +0000

sooo yea so far ive watched several variations on your script and it seems like your not the only one having trouble finding a second person your comfortable doing a skit with. ive seen 4 so far and each one was one person doing bolth sides. giving it an added sense of hilarity but also giving it a lack of sketch comedy feel. the way the script is written it sounds like its supposed to be done by a group like “whitest kids you know” or “chocolate cake city” or “Derrick Comedy” its not a bad little sketch in my opinion and its got a kevin smith ring too it but it seems the major joke of it is sorta lost on most people. personally when i read it guy on the left just screamed randal from clerks at me. and im guessing that was one of the angles you were aiming for. well keep it up and i might give you some ideas for script writing. keep on writing cause its the only way to get better. Peace

By: Rose

Rose — Sat, 29 Mar 2008 22:31:53 +0000

love the idea!!

By: Sarah

Sarah — Sat, 29 Mar 2008 16:50:29 +0000

I have an idea … maybe you could write a script that was quite short, and had simple dialogue about not much … I think it would be interesting to see the creative ways in which different people interpreted it.
Anyway, I like this whole releasing the script idea.

By: ~ Tammie ™

~ Tammie ™ — Sat, 29 Mar 2008 01:33:47 +0000

Great idea, Ben! o(^ - ^)o *♥*♥*♥*♥*

By: lucy

lucy — Sat, 29 Mar 2008 01:18:45 +0000

three cheers for vimeo!

By: Victor

Victor — Sat, 29 Mar 2008 00:02:46 +0000

Hey there!
i´m From Venezuela, and i propose to you something…
can i translate the Scrip (because my friends talk spanish and they can´t talk a lot of english) and put the Scrip in the Subtitles?
if i can do that i can probably do the Video =D
what Do you Think People!!!!

By: Nora

Nora — Fri, 28 Mar 2008 20:10:11 +0000

HAHA, WOW! I love it, Ben. I would love to film it with some friends, but to tell you the truth…we would slaughter it. I’ll leave it to someone who can capture the greatness that it obviously has.
Nora

By: tejayce

tejayce — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 20:26:03 +0000

nevermind .. seems like i got a cookie which wont expire until 2009 :)

By: tejayce

tejayce — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 20:00:18 +0000

haha .. great story .. i hope a few people create vids to this. i wish i could.

about that tshirthell thing .. maybe you could explain that in a post, cause i dont see any references, which would assure me you will get the credit for my purchase ..

By: Zsmart

Zsmart — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 16:14:16 +0000

Hey boh3m3 this is really good man! You definitely have premium writing skills. It kept me interested and most of all it made me chuckle.
It reminded me of Kevin Smith type dialogue.
If you could write for me that would be great. Me and my friends had an idea of an intervention for a person who is addicted to text messaging. Haha think about it.

By: El Ducko

El Ducko — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 15:58:21 +0000

Nice sipt, keep it going

By: niuri_cigarete

niuri_cigarete — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 10:06:37 +0000

read it… awesomeness XD totally hilarious… why didn;t u do them yourself… huh? :)

By: Vinnie

Vinnie — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 05:13:40 +0000

Read it, love it. Hilarious, Boh3m3! I may act it out with my friends, possibly put it on youtube. We don’t fit the parts so it would just be for fun. If I do, I’ll definitely link it to you.